“Snoopi! Snoopi! Come on, Snoopi!” Emily
yelled after her favorite puppy, wandering down a winding path in the woods.
Where could he have gone? Emily huffed and puffed, ready for a tantrum. How dare
Snoopi run off on her? Her child-like steps slowly morphed into angry stomps as
the forest around her watched her performance.
Suddenly,
a large cabin appeared in her way, looming over her petite body. The loud,
high-pitched yips pulled her from her angry reverie, reminding her of her duty.
Cautiously, and with as much bravery as an 8-year-old could muster, Emily
walked towards the door.
The
door creaked open, silencing Snoopi’s yips. Worried, Emily called out to him.
“Snoopi! Where are you?” No answer.
Sniffling,
she ventured forth. The air was stale, like her basement at home. Naturally, it
was just as creepy. The furniture was covered with white sheets and spider webs
decorated every crevice. The sun fought
its way through the windows, battling the darkness for territory.
Every
room was empty, save for the bats and rats that scurried around. Emily was
starting to lose hope, but she had one more room to check. With trembling hand,
she turned the knob. The door was heavy, so she pushed her entire body up
against it.

“Oh,
my dear,” said a crackling voice, “I am so sorry. I had no idea the dog was
yours.”
Emily
sniffled, snot mingling with her tears. “Can I have him back?” she asked,
starting to hiccup.
The
voice paused. “No.” Emily hardly noticed the light fleeing into the fine air
becoming heavier and heavier. “But I can
have you!”
A
scream, darkness. The only sound left was the crackling of a fire. The decaying
cabin bled into the shadows, waiting for its next victim.
Great descriptive details, Sam. I especially like, "A blinding light restricted her vision, stifling heat causing her breath to hitch."
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